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Camping with My Sister

    In August, my sister and I took a vacation to the summit for camping. At that time, it was vacation after school graduation. My sister and I went to the summit in Batu, Malang. The peak is the topmost part of the mountain. If analogized to a triangle, it means that the corner points are facing the baseline. Compared to other surfaces, the peak has a point higher than the point directly adjacent to it. My sister and I chose to vacation at the summit because we wanted to enjoy the cold weather and get closer to nature.